When Seasons Are Characters
A week or so ago, here in New
Jersey, after a stretch of hot and humid days and warm rain, we had a couple of
cooler days with no humidity, high temperatures in just the mid 70s Fahrenheit
(about 20 Celsius) and nighttime lows at around 58F (9C). Really, it felt like
fall, my favourite season, and it put me in such a good mood. I almost felt
like it, the fall, was talking to me;
telling me that the stress of the summer (I thought summers were supposed to be
easy street for teachers) with its smaller pay cheques, chaotic (but
enjoyable) trips to the beach, the crushing days of oppressive heat and
humidity, etc were coming to a close and a new season, with its own set of
challenges, is coming. I felt like an old friend, one I’d started to realise I
was missing, had just rung me up and said she was coming for a visit and asked
if I could put her up in the spare room or on the pullout sofa bed.
As people do nowadays with all
sorts of social media - writers, especially - I posted on Facebook and Twitter
how cool the weather was and how it offered a taste of autumn. One friend
‘liked’ my Facebook post. Two others commented. Both posted statements in an
“Oh no!” sort of way stating that they didn’t want summer to go just yet. To one
comment, I replied saying that I love the fall because out go the weeks of heat
and humidity, in comes the cooler weather and the exciting feel of putting on
that first sweatshirt, taking my son for pumpkin picking and pony rides,
watching the leaves change colour and, of course, the lead up to the upcoming
holiday season that begins in late autumn (Halloween) and runs into mid-winter
(Valentine’s Day) with all of their sights, sounds and smells. I wouldn’t even
mind a little snowfall either.
As I thought about this - and
like I said, I felt like the hint of autumn was an old friend saying hello - I
tried to create a list of books and movies in which the season the story is set
plays a major role like it’s a character interacting with the protagonist and integral
to the plot. Of course, in good stories the season or seasons have to be more
than ornamental but, in many cases, once it’s established whether it’s spring
or summer, winter or fall, there isn’t much to them. In a story, say, about a
family going on Christmas holiday, there might be snow and a fireplace but they
might just be there to establish that, yes, it is winter with the characters
doing things that would be typically done in a winter holiday environment.
Could that story - and I’m not thinking of any story in particular - be
rewritten and be just as good if the family went on a summer beach resort
instead?
Examples that popped into my head
were The Body by Stephen King, Picnic
by William Inge and Spike Lee’s film Do
The Right Thing. For me, all of those
stories couldn’t have been told in any other time of the year. Coincidentally,
all of them are set in the summer but that, of course, doesn’t mean the summer
is the best setting for novels and movies. That’s something to look at in
another post. That all my examples are set in the summer is more likely an
example of my laziness or my lack of exposure that I couldn’t immediately think
of a book or movie I liked, that isn’t set in summer, whose seasonal setting
made a major impact.
In The Body, which was adapted into the very successful and much
loved movie Stand By Me in the
mid-1980s, a group of four boys set out to find a missing body - presumed dead
- of another boy. They tell their parents they’re going to camp out and,
naturally, go through various adventures that betray inner fears, reveal new
heroism and so on. It’s not just perfectly set for the summer because that is
when they could camp out and go on an outdoor adventure. It’s perfectly set for
the summer because that’s when kids are out of school and have all the time in
the world to do whatever they want and that often comes with having the time
for self-discovery whether brought about by looking for a missing boy, having a
go at your best friend or something else.
In Picnic, it’s Labour Day and the town is gearing up for its
annual town event - the picnic. There’s a stranger in town. Well, the stranger
is Hal, an old college friend of Alan Seymour. Then, there are the Owens
sisters - Madge and Millie. For those of you who haven’t read it or seen the
film, I won’t give anything away. However, I’m sure you can imagine that
there’s drama surrounding the ‘stranger’ and the two girls. Again, the season,
which also happens to be summer - plays a major role. I don’t think the play
would’ve worked if it were set around, say, a New Year’s Eve party; at least
not in today’s world. Today, Christmas and New Year are such passing holidays.
As much as people enjoy and love them, there’s almost a sense of relief when
they’re done and over with. The summer, however, is something that people want
to linger on. This is especially true of young people and young people who are
unattached and have waited all summer for something big to happen. In the
United States there’s the added pressure, if you will, of Labour Day, the
social end of the summer season. So, it’s a perfect blend at this end of season
town picnic that everything comes to a head for Hal and Madge.
Finally, there’s Do The Right
Thing, set in a balmy New York. Spike Lee’s
movie is set in Brooklyn - the beautiful ethnic blend that it is - and pits
characters responding to their environment, physical and socioeconomic, in the
midst of a heat wave. If a summer heat wave, with no breeze, rising
temperatures and overwhelming humidity is not a perfect metaphor for
uncomfortable neighbourhood tensions then I must’ve been watching a different
movie. Like King’s novella and Inge’s play, summer is the only season that
could’ve worked with Do The Right Thing. The spring and fall are too neutral. There are cool days, there are
warmer days, there are humid days but these two seasons are too varied to serve
as a viable parallel storyline. The winter, too, doesn’t work because even
though there are ridiculously frigid days in New York people don’t complain about
cold like they do heat and humidity. The characters in Do The Right
Thing could simply bundle up and feel
instant warmth. There’s only so much clothing one can remove to cool down.
So, what stories do you love that
have as an unnamed character the season in which it is set? Do share. I’d love
to know. And, please, for my own enlightenment, let me know of those that are
set in the other three seasons. The super literary agent Donald Maass said in a
conference I attended that the writer has to be detailed when writing Setting.
It puts the reader into the book and gives it life. Setting, though, isn’t just
the description of the landscape and physical surroundings, the sounds and
smells. It’s also the unseen, but definitely, felt nuances of season.
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